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I enjoyed the story, it is very different from what I usually read, but it has been an enjoyable read so far, and I will continue reading it. I will not go into details about the plot in this review, as to not spoil anyone.
This was a joy to read. I found no glaring mistakes, it was very pleasant to read through and the flow was good.
I think the plot is quite interesting, I had a few issues with the first few chapters, both because I have not read many stories in this genre, and because it was slightly confusing, but after reading further into the novel everything started to get explained well and the pace was wonderful.
I think that the world and characters gets more fleshed out the further into the story you reach. It is explained well, without feeling intrusive into the story at all.
Great start keep up the good work. Btw the author is not using bots. He is using one account to vote for himself. Unfortunately the account looks generic so ppl misunderstood.
Honestly, I'd throw my lot down with this novel just from its readability alone. Among the sea of broken grammar and sentences, this thing floats pretty darn well. Most mistakes are so minor that they'd be difficult to spot in a first read. As for the content, the story feels a little rushed at first, but it settles down quickly enough, forming into a straightforward and fun narrative that you can get used to pretty easily. Good work, would recommend.
This novel is just insane.
Really confusing in the beginning.
The first few chapters may have scared of some potential readers, because it is just really confusing and the mc seams to be simply evil.
But it all gets better, it is awesome to progress in the story and learn more about the mc etc...
The pacing is awesome.
The only thing i think of as a shame, that we cant see the mc progress through the early levels of becoming stronger, he is already stronger than the most and i would have loved to see him grow from 0 to 100.
But I'm definitly going to keep reading the brilliant story
So i finally finished reading all the chapters released so far (chapter 61), and i can with confidence that this novel is a hidden gem. The story is really original in a way that ignores the cliches we are so used to, and instead presents us with a concrete plot and rational MC.
About the story: We have a soul tormented by its past decisions, and fuelled by a sense of purpose and revenge that is presented in a way that is natural and makes us understand why the MC does what he does. Make no mistake this is an evil MC. Although his actions are explained together with his troubled circunstances and we can sympathize and even understand his choices, he by no means has limits to achieving his goals and will crush anyone who stand in his way, enemy or not.
The lore of the story is not tha unique in a sense that we have the common fantasy world and gods with a system. What is different however is that the system is not so clear to its inhabitants, whom only have a superficial understanding about it, and not the full detailed information. For example, you would know your class, level, and skills, but not your specific stats or how the skill calculates damage.
Its relevant as well to say that the story picks up the pace as you read. At start, not all is explained, but as you go you will be told about the world, the gods, the MC himself and his past.
About the Updates: The releases are somewhat too little and too sparse for now, but the author has promised too pick up the pace as more interest is shown on his novel.
All in all this is a really good novel that can be amazing if done right. I would definetely recommend you give it a try because if you stick around you will definetely enjoy it.
Good writing quality with some grammatical mistakes
Stability of updating is kinda slow 1\2 chapter a week
Story development is really good I like the pacing of the story
Characters are mostly well thought out and not one dimensional.
World bacround is amazing and makes you see it clearly in your head
A hidden gem worth your time.Start to really make sense around chapter 11.This is a story for those that like intelligent mc with strategic military thinking which usually pays of with a glorious slaughter.While not perfect it's still much better than most novels you will read.
This story is unique and well written. The system is more than the general systems that you see in other novels, which is great for people who like to read system novels like me and got tired of repeated novels in the same genre.
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Looking forward to more chapters and a lot of great ideas through the story.
Best wishes for a great novel.
Popular Reviews
This was a joy to read. I found no glaring mistakes, it was very pleasant to read through and the flow was good.
I think the plot is quite interesting, I had a few issues with the first few chapters, both because I have not read many stories in this genre, and because it was slightly confusing, but after reading further into the novel everything started to get explained well and the pace was wonderful.
I think that the world and characters gets more fleshed out the further into the story you reach. It is explained well, without feeling intrusive into the story at all.
I would suggest you to try it out.
Really confusing in the beginning.
The first few chapters may have scared of some potential readers, because it is just really confusing and the mc seams to be simply evil.
But it all gets better, it is awesome to progress in the story and learn more about the mc etc...
The pacing is awesome.
The only thing i think of as a shame, that we cant see the mc progress through the early levels of becoming stronger, he is already stronger than the most and i would have loved to see him grow from 0 to 100.
But I'm definitly going to keep reading the brilliant story
About the story: We have a soul tormented by its past decisions, and fuelled by a sense of purpose and revenge that is presented in a way that is natural and makes us understand why the MC does what he does. Make no mistake this is an evil MC. Although his actions are explained together with his troubled circunstances and we can sympathize and even understand his choices, he by no means has limits to achieving his goals and will crush anyone who stand in his way, enemy or not.
The lore of the story is not tha unique in a sense that we have the common fantasy world and gods with a system. What is different however is that the system is not so clear to its inhabitants, whom only have a superficial understanding about it, and not the full detailed information. For example, you would know your class, level, and skills, but not your specific stats or how the skill calculates damage.
Its relevant as well to say that the story picks up the pace as you read. At start, not all is explained, but as you go you will be told about the world, the gods, the MC himself and his past.
About the Updates: The releases are somewhat too little and too sparse for now, but the author has promised too pick up the pace as more interest is shown on his novel.
All in all this is a really good novel that can be amazing if done right. I would definetely recommend you give it a try because if you stick around you will definetely enjoy it.
Stability of updating is kinda slow 1\2 chapter a week
Story development is really good I like the pacing of the story
Characters are mostly well thought out and not one dimensional.
World bacround is amazing and makes you see it clearly in your head
A hidden gem worth your time.Start to really make sense around chapter 11.This is a story for those that like intelligent mc with strategic military thinking which usually pays of with a glorious slaughter.While not perfect it's still much better than most novels you will read.
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Looking forward to more chapters and a lot of great ideas through the story.
Best wishes for a great novel.