Embers of the Dead

+100 elemental pool (Air)

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

<p>"Dengarkan aku baik-baik tuan Ryu Ji hoon. berhentilah mengurus hidupku dan lebih baik kau mengurus dirimu sendiri" kata Soo jung semakin ketus lalu Soo jung menghempaskan tangan Ji hoon dan pergi meninggalkannya.</p>

"AHHHH!!!BECAUSE OF THIS STUPID RINGS, OUR LIFE HAS BEEN MISERABLE!!! WHY DO WE NEED TO TAKE ON WHAT OUR ANCESTORS DID??? WHY?... Why???..." She shouted out of anger…

"Then Let's finish this quickly!!"

the story is very inviting, it embeds the great and  truthfull skills it the writer as it  contains beautiful content

Talking about ch 241. And i just want to say that i am a bit harsh with the critique, and just want to say that while there may be inconsistences (very few) those do not define the incredible book you have written. I  trully enjoy reading it . In retrosepct i just want to say to you the author that you are doing an amazing job and do not lose confindence in yourself and you ability to write. Its just that when you are immersed in the book you can get heated real quick. So dont take the critque that you get to personal as most if not all come from passionate readers who enjoy your story. Its almost like when something bad (or not enjoyable) happens many will complain but when you are doing an amazing job, there is often no praise (if you take me as an example ahha). So keep up.

I give a criticism after reading, the work to bases to evolve well, I like the MC with its attitude, the rhythm of the story, and some quite funny scenes 😂