
Eldritch Shop System (DROPPED)
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Author:
TrinityShock
- Status: Ongoing
Rating(3.5 / 5.0, 18 votes)
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The title and system are kind of misleading. I was expecting something chtulu related or some other eldritch horror kind of thing. But it ended up being a Videogame Shop system instead.
The MC is pretty much a blank slate at this point. We have been shown zero backstory, background, or motivations up to this point and he pretty much acts pretty randomly though he's kind of an asshole most of the time. The thing with the chickens was pretty cold-blooded.
The plot is fine, a big part in it plays the shop, which I think is made pretty nice. Overall world building is done properly, so you've got a sense of what's going on.
Stability of updates is pretty good as well. The only downside to the novel would be writing quality, with some mistakes here and there, but it's readable.
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