I liked it in the beginning but the further the story went, the more I hated the story. The character development is stupid as there is no depth to the characters in the story. The supporting characters are laughable and pathetic. It's like the author made them very stupid in order to emphasize the MC's intelligence. The MC's character is inconsistent and the timeline twists are a petty excuse for prolonging the story.
"An odd request?" Jack said raising an eyebrow. "I'm going to need a better reason than that. Besides Van and Finn, Brave and Fate make the best combo." He said. "If I am not given a good reason I'll have to decline this request. To break up teamwork on this scale would be bad in the field." He said all this while shaking his head.
As it is a custom to give your novel five-star reviews. I'm giving it a five-star review.Oh how proud I feel.To give my novel a five star review.Oh since I am doing this, this meme should be appropriate.
Lol sry for this but i don't like mc like this it just I'm not able to read more than 8 chapters sry for review but I don't like mc who struggle even with a system
have yet to read it (as there are only 4 chapters out as of now lol) but I love the author and their other works and hate that the only other review is a one star from someone who says they "hate the witch that helps others (for free?)" like what? you read the synopsis, no? you should've known about that already..... sigh
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