Eclipse Sword Immortal

Here is my review of this book, The Hidden Mysteries:World Building: So far the world building is alright for now, especially with the dark realm. I like in each chapter, the author expands more of what inside the dark dimension and gives more surprises. For the feedback on this, perhaps you can expand more on what inside the dark world or realm and giving more a detail description on its inside.Characters: Seven for me is quite a determined character as he is eager to get out from the dark realm. I also like the author tries to flesh him out as his relationship with his sister has even become one of his motivational drives to escape the dark realm. However, I do love the author to expand more on his character as the story goes on especially on his reaction the further he is inside the realmPacing: The pacing of the plot so far is alright, it's not slow, but not fast too. It is quite easy to follow for me. Overall, I recommended this book for those who like adventure book. Good job author and thank you.

Honestly a great read. The only downside is the harem part, which feels kinda forced and unnecessary.