DAY 23 OF REQUESTING MLB TO CONTINUE DUAL CULTIVATION..........................................................................................................
ugh, just trash, looked interesting at first but got boring really fast, trough out the 150+ chaps that i read i didn't find any ******* in the story, felt like i was reading a boring diary and oh god, dont get me started on all that filler, MC is cardboard cutout, i legit dont get him, hes just..... there? hes cold most of the time but.... he just seems bland, and there's no particular reason either, i love cold and even evil protagonist but this guy just seems so.... lifeless? dead? either way, its extremely boring, done.
nothing bad to say about it drawed me in from the beginning and still one of my top cultivation novels together with swallowed star and true martial world.
definitely did not get hooked by the cover.. yep definitely not..i umm.. got hooked by the synopsis hmm yes the synopsis..what a beautiful synopsis, those beautiful curves.. what a great cursive font, and wow! those huge round... bold letters, they look very bree.. readable *cough* *cough*
At this point I can't even tell if this is actually an original novel or a half-decent translation of a trashy mech/gene cultivation CN webnovel...MC still the same... And loves arguing with opponents in battle... is also complete trash who can't deal with returning enemy he already defeated... Thinks with his jiji too much Retarded weak MC thinks more about getting p**ssy than getting op and dominating the world with his system ...................................
The story has a lot of grammatical issues. There was some sentences that could have been worded differently for a better story flow. A few words were misspelled, and transitioning to the next scene is kind of hard to followed. But, every authors is bound to have a lot to a few writing issues. No one is spare! I have never seen an author with a grammar-free story before. With that said, my honest thought is....I'm a big mythology lover! love, love, love it! This story is right up my ally! I like how the author indicated which gods or goddesses is which, and power. But in the long-run it might be harder to remember which god and power they are.The author could make a page, listing them all or remind the reader at the end of each chapters ( this might be a bit much). Another thing is the characters. They were appearing one by one, but for those that were introduce at the beginning beside the gods, it was a bit hard to follow. I would think, for me, is that the pacing was a bit too fast. Especially, the emotional distress that Sol had when he was desperately searching for Anya. A short description about their relationship would be great in supporting his action. I feel like there's more it than just a simple teacher and student relationship. There were a few plot hole that I found to be inconsistent, but the story is still in development , so scratch that. Maybe, there's a plot twist that the author is planning on later. In overall, even thought there are grammatical issues. That could be fix, so there's no need to worry. Beside that the author is doing great! Keep up the good work!
Very well written and thought out story with an excellent blend between the game world and the real world and how the effects of events bleed through between the two. The way the interpersonal relationships are handled is one of the defining parts of the story for me. With each of the main characters bringing their own uniqueness to the group dynamic, but all meshing together as if they were meant to always have been for each other
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