The novel is pretty decent, but I am not sure if the author has given up on it releasing. I need to know if I should just remove it from my library at this rate.
Actually its pretty good, at least i read till 200 chapter and was above average...i mean not the best but idea pretty good... Not that boring and hes only lazy in others think... Hes hiding hes power cuze otherwise he would die.... He read novels so.... 😁😁 Hes careful, but helping hes disclipes everywhere.... And etc, really i enjoyed reading this
You have a great idea for the story! I like the mixture of time travel, reincarnation, and all the science-fiction aspects of your story.The plot is intriguing and your characters are nicely created.The thing that bothers me is the way you construct dialogues, it shows the imperfection of the author's workshop, so there is a place for improvement.
Zamia's mouth watered the moment she spotted the strawberries. She grabbed a bunch, It's skin sitting smoothly next to hers , a promise of the sweetness within. Yet..
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