Everything is good but story is very slow paced . starting was amazing snd by far one of my top story development but it is very slow !!,!
Pls author fast pace the novel for revenge .
character is to stupid, and the early life gets rushed through with the writer spending more time trying to justify his stupidity than be writing a believable character
-Realms
Example: Like the Six Realms of Buddhism: REALMS Gods/Heaven, REALMS Asuras, REALMS Humans, REALMS Animals, REALM Shungry Ghosts, And REALMS Demon/Hell.
-Dimensions
Example: Parallel, Secular and Virtual Dimensions.
-Planets
Example: Multiuniverses or Thousands of Planets.
There are also three Worlds
-Mortal World
-Celestial World
-Immortal World
for those who are reading this comment, I would like make a small note... people are posting comments like... I could not continue reading after 37 chapter...or bad English... or MC is stupid and lame....so before you believe them...you should give it try, I mean i too have read comments and then gave up few novels because of bad review...but when I read them...I found that they were so awesome...what I am trying to say is everyone has different tastes and likes... as for different negative comments... people are expecting op mc in the first 30 chapters then what's the use of writing long stories...novel are all about story development, how mc goes from an ant to dragon...if you expect and instant op then please go and read those short stories with 20-30 chapters....as for stupid actions of mc, it is a part of character development...
Bad grammar. hurts my eyes when there are no punctuations.
Stupid MC, Naive, gullible, idiotic, not intelligent, low EQ.
terrible at describing things, No plot, bad plot for the sake of story progression, Low level NPC, English names in an indian kingdom, only the MC has indian name.
The system is glitching, has many errors, inferior system, Experience is wrong, shows less stat points
I got to 38 and iam tired of the stupid stuff it had amazing potential but I Just don’t think this author is the right one for it and Breaking the 4 th wall sucks on my opinion
The MC's power level are inconsistent, in the begining he was able to defeat a high level opponents, as he gains more levels and stats he was finding it harder to defeat his opponents, the author doesn't explain how the stats are related to the cultivation level, he was able to defeat some mid level opponents with his stats below 10, when his stats are 100+ he was having trouble with the same level of enemies
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Pls author fast pace the novel for revenge .
-Realms
Example: Like the Six Realms of Buddhism: REALMS Gods/Heaven, REALMS Asuras, REALMS Humans, REALMS Animals, REALM Shungry Ghosts, And REALMS Demon/Hell.
-Dimensions
Example: Parallel, Secular and Virtual Dimensions.
-Planets
Example: Multiuniverses or Thousands of Planets.
There are also three Worlds
-Mortal World
-Celestial World
-Immortal World
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Stupid MC, Naive, gullible, idiotic, not intelligent, low EQ.
terrible at describing things, No plot, bad plot for the sake of story progression, Low level NPC, English names in an indian kingdom, only the MC has indian name.
The system is glitching, has many errors, inferior system, Experience is wrong, shows less stat points
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