Dying To Show

The salesman seeing a person approach, enthusiastically said, "Come for sausage? Oscar brand sausage offers sincere treatment to all. The flavor is guaranteed."

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

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I'm having a good development from the beginning, the protagonist is not too idiotic and the plot simply does not make everyone look like idiots.At the moment we are on chapter 22 if I remember correctly and I hope that the personality of the protagonist advances with his ambitions and becomes someone Dominant like a tyrant. Let him only defend interests, since he comes from below and only his fat partner helps him as a roommate. Help him contribute in the future to repay that favor.

The story telling is very good. I like the way the author made this. It's different to many war stories, mainly because it feels like it was commentary from a history book. I liked it, I hope the author continues the book. Really interesting and delightful. I wonder what will happen next. I will be waiting.

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Good job! Really enjoyed reading every bit of it. The write-up has a good flow and the plot is interesting. Waiting for more! Keep up the good work!!