Dying by Your Hand

These people already have 10 points of power value. After all, for them to make some traps or other ways to unite to kill a enchanted beast was still doable. After such a long time of accumulation, a lot of power value has piled up.

Biyu quickly dried her hair and let it drop to her hips. She wore silver earrings and a necklace and silver-colored heels. She wore an elegant and long dress that was formal and was a light green, which brought out her green eyes. While Biyu looked mostly Chinese, you could definitely tell that she is mixed. Her green eyes are evidence and her eyes were large and she had natural double eyelids from her mother. She also had really long eyelashes that she got from her mother. Her mixed features stood out beautifully and made her look dazzling. Biyu's white shoulders were shown nicely in the dress and her small face looked cute and breath-taking at the same time. As Biyu smiled cutely in the mirror, bringing out her dimples, she suddenly turned pale. She recalled the thoughts of yesterday.

katana itu meluncur sangat cepat tiba-tiba sebuah lubang hitam muncul didepan pria itu dan satu lagi muncul dibelakang aldo dengan cepat ayahnya segera menahan katana itu dia memegang tepat dihulu pedang itu.

     Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.  

Read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is one of the best stories I have read until now, the MC development is O.P and mainly the writing quality and world background are very good, overall I recommend you to read this :D!!!

Hope this is not some BS novel where the MC gains 10× the experience but then at some point people can match his strength or leveling speed

I have already written 320 chapters of the story, with hundreds more in the draft. According to beta readers, the quality remained consistent till the latest stuff. So give it a go and have fun reading.