Dungeon Overlord System

Theres only been a few chapters so far so this is an early review but...

Writing Quality: This one was unexpectedly good. The author has a good comman of english and I haven’t spotted any typos or grammatical errors. The sentence structure is well paced and varies from line to line to keep things flowing.

Story and character development: The main character has a depth to him, and the plot itself feels realistic and raw. The characters are multifaceted and not just boring stock characters. I really felt the emotion during the appearance of the second creature. (Intentionally Vague to avoid spoilers)

World background: Too early tp say much, but what has been revealed so far has been done through more show rather than tell. I love that.

Overall, this book has the potential to become a gem. Author, please don’t drop this novel :)

I gave this a try, I really did. But after finishing the prologue (chapter 17), I just didnt have any interest to continue reading. A lot of stuff at the beginning is so confusing and nothing is explained. It leads to a ton of guess work, and even then its difficult to keep track of stuff. It’s hard to tell if the author just didnt want to explain the stuff and expected it to be understood, or if they were trying to make it sound interesting.

this story has a good start !! ![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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i havent read the novel yet although the novel synopsis looks interesting
though is it translated novel?