Dubious adventures

"Here is your id. If you could not pay for your tax, the place will be confiscated and you will become a slave." —Rod

I like what the story means and represents but a lot of room for improvement! the story is very good so keep that up but you need more details and specifics!!. keep trying I know you can make this book even better!!. good book!! :)

Good read. This is an interesting thriller. Although I was amazed by the Table of contents. and  I know that there are alot more chapters coming. I can never create a table of content beforehand lol.good read