Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]

if you want to read something lewd and funny, this novel is for you... i love the mc he is smart, funny and very op... its new novel so its don't have many chapters... but hope we will get more chapters soon...i love the other novel which called snake evolution system... written by same author ...

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No doubt good story potential but my man get a editor or someone to check your grammar. That is the biggest weak point of this book. But other than that keep it up.

grammar is bad, but i like the story.
Please use some kind of grammar app or something like that it is really annoying      

(sorry for my bad english)

The story is decent but the terrible grammar just takes away everything it had to offer. Even basic things like names are forgotten from one sentence to the other, almost no sentence is grammatically correct. It's insane how people give this story 4+ stars for writing quality...
I have the feeling, that the author doesn't want to edit his chapters or he doesn't realise, that this looks like a soup of letters.

I would say that I am having fun reading this right now despite some of the writing errors however the big downfall of the novel for me is that the story progression is too slow. I know that it is a new novel but taking more than 5-10 chapters for a scene to progress is kind of annoying but all in all it still fun

somewhat good from the start but later ison in the story, mc will become s7tupid which are the cases of some novel that has overpowered chrcterstics and strng backer in it. he doesn't think about the consequences of his action which is stupid. he always creates problems. if only in the story some of his love ones died and  mature that is best.
so overallthe story is okay the plot is okay, only mc has iq problem.