Interesting concept, I'll admit. The main problems I have with it are the horrendous grammar, annoying/unnatural dialogues, and horrible handling of the third and first-person rules (stop switching!).
The best thing about this novel is the update stability. If you can turn off your brain and get down to reading, you'll have plenty of chapters as you follow the protagonist.
Still, I don't recommend this.
The characters are typical of what you'd expect from a horny **** writing a dual cultivation novel, and there isn't exactly a world built.
Great novel with unique cultivation system. The novel just has 8 chapters released but all of them are good. Looking for the future chapters and i expect more from this. I can't say more about the characters and story development from 8 chapters but i will definitely review again later in future.
The Book is consistent enough in grammar,(If you wouldn't take note about English depth) The pacing is great, The MC is quite humorous. The only thing I don't like is I find this book early where no little chapters just yet for now. So! BLUE BALLS!!
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My Dao of Shamelessness is the most powerful in this continent.
No one can stop my rampage as I go into the faraway land.
So, for my powerful and deadly attack!
Comeforth!! 5-star retribution review!!!
The pacing is normal for the start. Good.
Humorous MC. Great.(for me at least)
Chapter? We have chapters everyday!
Grammar. Quite good if you don't sought something only professional writer had.
So overall this is great! And i'm expecting for more
The best thing about this novel is the update stability. If you can turn off your brain and get down to reading, you'll have plenty of chapters as you follow the protagonist.
Still, I don't recommend this.
The characters are typical of what you'd expect from a horny **** writing a dual cultivation novel, and there isn't exactly a world built.
Don't read this, save your eyes!
Story progress fast. MC is an immortal but acts like a teenager in first chapter.
Some of you might drop it half way but don't!
Casue there are kinky chapters waiting for you!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email [email protected] We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!