deleted last review cause of inappropriate words..... so here I go with some manners.
great novel, intriguing premise of a drunken faced mc.
all 45 chapters in. love the way you handled the mc origin story, detailed but not rushed or any info dump, it showed he's drive and what made him lin donghai and it transitioned well into his next world
great combo of brain and brawn
swell guy, never a dull moment around the kid the underworld ride. doesn't stink of self righteousness.
great read, and an advice for author 2 words
this is one of the best novels I have read, I bow to you sir handsome fatty. This novel truly has monarchic levels of potential on the level of grasping evil and legend of the great sage.
Yo this is some gourmett level novel right here the only thing is i hope you make this super long take your time with the world building dont rush things and the harem should be slowly introduced and organically meshed well all the best
Writing a review is the hardest part for me.
I would rather do scripting than do a review here. Nonetheless, for my book.
Hey, I don't know who started this culture here in Web Novel. But, it's becoming quite trending here. Almost everyone did it as some kind of necessity to write their review. I don't like it, though.
So this is my first and last shameless review of the book.
Well well, I'll try my hardest to entertain my readers who entail for this book.
Alright, give it a try and delve into this fabulous surrealism world of the_handsome_fatty or just Joey.
For now well executed but watch out cuz it should continue. Hopefully you don't drown in making the mc too cringey with drunk humour. Too much ain't good but I see none for now. I like the idea of a drunken immortal(I always wanted to read more about an oddball wandering, mysterious mc). Finally the make or break moment for me. Is this harem or otp? or no romance?
What ever the case good luck with your story.
I am too lazy to write reviews but this novel needs more support so teehee. the novel is great btw just do it read it i said readdddddddddddddddd it you guys and gals
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great novel, intriguing premise of a drunken faced mc.
all 45 chapters in. love the way you handled the mc origin story, detailed but not rushed or any info dump, it showed he's drive and what made him lin donghai and it transitioned well into his next world
great combo of brain and brawn
swell guy, never a dull moment around the kid the underworld ride. doesn't stink of self righteousness.
great read, and an advice for author 2 words
I would rather do scripting than do a review here. Nonetheless, for my book.
Hey, I don't know who started this culture here in Web Novel. But, it's becoming quite trending here. Almost everyone did it as some kind of necessity to write their review. I don't like it, though.
So this is my first and last shameless review of the book.
Well well, I'll try my hardest to entertain my readers who entail for this book.
Alright, give it a try and delve into this fabulous surrealism world of the_handsome_fatty or just Joey.
What ever the case good luck with your story.