I haven't facepalmed and drowned in an ocean of stupidity yet so this is already in the top 1% of all the stories on this site. I'm actually decently interested in most of the female heroines so + for that aswell.
This is a very good story till now. ( Ch12 )The language and grammar could use some work. Author - kun, i recommend that you read the book - 'high school grammar and comprehension by wren and martin'Keep up the good work.
Have A Question? Ask in the comments.As for Harem/Non-harem - Yes, Harem.(read the note below synopsis.)Release schedule? 2ch/d after a few days of this review.
So far, everything has been good. There is no problems that I will nitpick on, the time is not quite ripe yet for a review since there has been only 6 chapters so far, but since the author has requested for it, I have shown up, I am not able to give a definite score because of the low amount of chapters to review but I would definitely keep this in my Library as long as it doesn't drop in performance.
I lost a few brain cells reading this.Typical MC being a pervert and taking what should have been a normal training scenario too far while harassing some perfect belle whose reaction isn't justified anger, but blushing.Cringe.
A somewhat below average store novel. The translation quality seems good but the quality of the writing itself is quite poor and often leaves me confused. The explanations of the worlds power system, the mcs store systems features etc are all really scuffed. I still don't entirely understand the power system.How do you get levels? What is a mark and how do you get one? How did our protagonist get to level 15 if you need a mark to break past level 10? None of this makes sense. If it weren't for the above issues I'd give this a 2.75/5 but I'm settling with a 2/5 for now.
the concept is good but the execution is soo terribly bad .i love an evil mc or a profit oriented mc that does what ever it take to achieve his goal but forcing the plot to limit an evil mc is just bad .if you wanna make an evil mc he need to be in control of everything he need to be 1000 steps over his enemy not some mc who only react never attack .btw the story flow is so slow with one relevant chapter in every ten.
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