A supreme being had died in the immortal world.....this is the title and I think mere looking at the title, it kinda pissed me off and I think ion like it.....................
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The writing is good (I love the intro) and and the world building is excellent, I won’t spoil you but you’ll find out after you read it. Anyone who likes cultivation related stories (or is new to this genre) should give it a read! Even though there are very few chapters now, I'm hooked to reading more. Look forward to more updates soon!
I'd like this to be picked so that I can read a few chapters and find out if this meets my expectations. This story seems very interesting and can possibly be a good read... or trash as has been the norm lately
Honestly the story is one of the best I have read. It is great, intriguing and keeps the readers wanting for more. The writing quality is however a bit of a problem. The author doesn't really know a lot about tenses (keeps using present simple almost everytime in the beginning chapters etc). But fortunately the quality keeps on improving as the story progresses.The characters are great and likeable but could have been better. The author should have given more depth to the characters to make their choices in the story understandable to the readers.The world is like majority of western fantasy novels. A magical world ruled by with elves, Goblins, dragons, humans etc. (Has a system type class system)The updating stability is 'ok'. Not too good but not bad either. Overall a great read, if you like kingdom building novels. The mc is focused on his goal of conquering, building and improving. 😃
"Yeah, but I hardly think the council would have trained mage child. If it is a mage mark, it would mean he is in league with them," Chen explained. "Either that, or he's under their influence."
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