Yo this is some gourmett level novel right here the only thing is i hope you make this super long take your time with the world building dont rush things and the harem should be slowly introduced and organically meshed well all the best
I like the story but it has been around 50 chapters but I barely know about MCβs friendsβ characters like they were his best friends but were introduced and suddenly left, nothing about whatβs happening in real world. Where is his body now in real life since his soul is trapped and etc etc. Majority of focus is on him fighting monsters. Barely any conversation with characters other than Aurora. And this is all in constructive criticism. I still like the novel but I hope you would spend a little more time on creating a background of world likw what is happening around him, what are his friends and other people feeling around him. So that we can also dive into the world through your novel
This is what i want.Mas maganda tlga basahen pag tagalog haha,kaya kuto nsabe kc gusto kulang. Kung may anagal kayo mag comment den kayo nang sarile nyo para masaya.
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