I saw and watched your video on YouTube (which was released 12 days ago) and it was really helpful and I just had to check your novel , i also watched some your vidoes on your YouTube channel and subscribed and for that i am giving this novel a five stars rating ( even though i havent read a single chapter ) . I'm planning to read if you keep updating in the future thank you for the helpful vid because I really planning to become an author but don't really have the budget and know how to get started. — Unseen_nathan
Good read.The book has alot of potential.There is subtle world building.You could see author, has a future vision. Unlike other authors who don't have anything where is story going.
Base on what I have read so far, the story has a refreshing twist on the usual college romance trope. I like the premise of Frida, someone who’s so focused on her studies that she’s almost out of touch with her own desires, getting pulled into a secret note game.It adds a bit of intrigue and spice to her otherwise predictable life.The tension with Laziel, her former best friend turned enemy (and now potential love interest), is a trope I personally enjoy when done well. The push and pull between past closeness and current animosity can lead to some great emotional moments, especially if both characters are forced to confront old wounds.With that being said, the growth of this story really comes down to the execution. If the characters feel real and the notes build up to something meaningful, I could see this being an addictive read. If it leans too much into clichés without enough emotional depth, it could lose some impact. Overall, I think the concept has a lot of potential, keep up, the marvelous work. Author!
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