Dragon Pirate's Slice Of Life

well author does our mc gets a revenge arc

I think it's great novel just missing a better description of the characters from mc original worlds information I'm just perfectionist 😋

Sempurna untuk cerita santai dan seru!Cerita ini seru untuk orang yang suka cerita santai dan selipan comedy. Yang sang mc melihat kelakuan keturan Li di riwayat hidup mereka apa aja yang di lakukan sepanjang hidup mereka.

Well your novel only has 20 chapters so can't reall judge how it  will turn out, but I'm liking it as of now, I particularly liked that grim reaper and her quirky character ,in the end I will only say keep going.

Very good introduction of characters, a nice story so far keep up the work. I see the potential bro, just keep on working dawg I'm a day one fr.