Downfall Of The Kings

Hola, Its the Author.

I genuinely didnt know I could write a review for my own book...

Mwahahahaha.

Anyway enjoy my shameless review.

Downfall Of The Kings is a fantastic book. It plays with a lot of ideas and topics that have already been established within the fantasy community. While the book is certainly inspired by many of these, I can assure you, its defenitly unique in its own right.

Prepare for a lot of twists, turns and snarky stupidity. Honestly would You expect anything less? The main character is modeled after me you know.

The writing at the beginning is very rough so bear with me please. I think the quality seems to be getting better... I dont really know but its a lot easier to write now.

[Insert Awkward Laugh Here]

Anyway Im sure I have bored you by now with this Review. Go out There and read my book!!!!!!!!

Please...

Sorry for the exclamation points, I didn’t mean to yell at you, I was just excited.

Thank you for all your continued support!!!!

REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
Now, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work!
ADVICE
None, the author was a better writer compared to me! Haha.

Well done. I have read a few stories that are inspired by games structures but this is the first that has a well-thought plot with a flow and suspense without relying too much on game characteristics. Keep writing and best of luck

I usually dislike novels where they do a needlessly long piece of why so and so is re-incarnating, going back in time or some such.

However, this is the correct way of beginning with the past, all the relevant content, betrayal and in a single chapter. For one, this story is made of my favorite tropes, so I could only like it... that said, the writing definitely picks up from second chapter, and it's easy to read and entertaining.

One could almost see what's happening in the minds-eye.

Well done. I think I found a keeper... How about you?

This novel was so lit that I got chills! So freakin good and so awesome! More power to the writer's works and More inspiration to the creativity and imagination. All in all, a good read! Kudos and Peace ✌️

One of the best novels I have read on the site so far. Also one of the only novels with the comedy tag that actually made me giggle. I love every word I have read so far, and the witty dialogue is incredibly fun. I would die for Sir Blob, don't kill or leave him or I will drop instantly. Not really though it's too good so far. Time to play with slime.

This is my first story to review on this site, but I have reviewed a decent number of stories on other sites. Still I wanted to keep my expectations in check. But, boy, am I blown away. This is one of the best System stories that I have read. The author even goes and creates the tables, even though WN itself is not very conducive as a platform to create those tables.
1. Writing Quality: This is definitely the strongest suit. Author's writing is professional level. Vocabulary, grammar all refined and congruent to the story. No unnecessary use of overly flowery words that impede the progression of the story.
2. Stability of Updates: I see that the author updates regularly
4. Story Development: A steady progression. The pacing is great, not too slow but doesn't feel rushed. The author takes times with fleshing out scenes and characters which is great.
4. Character Design: Speaking of which, very clear, contrasting characters that won't bore you. Clear motivations.
5. World Background: Professionally done. You are immediately immersed into the world and never leave.
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Amazingly well done!
I honestly reccomend this to people wanting to find a good read.
Great work author!
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