The plot is very interesting and the World Background is very good. Stability of updates is equally good. Character Design is good in respect of the 3-4 characters I have come across up to the 5th chapter.A few more dialogues in each chapter is what people had advised me and I am passing on the same here as well as shorter paragraphs.Writing quality is good a few typos and mixing of tenses which do not disturb the flow of the story.All the best.
Interesting. The world is starting to get it. not every story will be completely unique. Instead, the characters' relationship with the world around them makes it compelling. Excellent work.
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