Doomsday Survival System

great character development
characters feel alive
descriptions are great
writing quality is beyond good
updates regular
keeps you on the edge
love it keep it up

The story is amazing! The author presented the characters and world background very well. It has some great plot twist! Really like it. Good job author!

Sage, what a catchy name for a protagonist.
Anyway, what a glorious origin. Tragedy strikes, and now the protagonist must struggle to survive. What a great concept.
This is an amazing novel. I recommend it.

There were minor punctuation and spelling errors here and there.

Plotwise, the story is intriguing and fascinating. I love how you portrayed the MC as a character who prioritises his family's safety above himself.

I hope he manages to survive and somehow protect those he holds dear in those trying time.



*For punctuations, if you have already used "...?!" then there isn't much need to put a comma behind the sentence unless its a phrase or dialog.

There were some errors as well where you used "your" instead of "you're". You're basically means you are... or something while your is used to symbolise something belongs to you.
Same goes with the word "his" and "he's" that you wanted to use.

This are just pointers for you, because I really enjoyed the story.

I love doomsday novels because they attack your sense of safety at a fast pace. It's easy to get hooked and need to know what happens in the next chapter and that's the case with this novel. Good job author!

I have to say, I like the writing style and the story development and character building, is isn't too slow or too fast it moves with the perfect pace and keeps us wondering what will happen next!!
Keep it up author! Looking forward to much more updates!