This is good so far.(i've read till chapter 1454).i like the harem.all of them are older than mc.(i have a thing for older women.πΆ).mc is not a beta so its okay.but in recent chapters face slapping young masters thingy kind of became repetitive and his harem girls teasing became little annoying.dont get me wrong im not telling they always need to act reserved with him but now it become bit overbearing.anyway its my personal opinion and im not criticizing author.overall its a still good book so keep it up author san...π
ok, it was easy enough to read all of what's been translated so far, but it was kind of boring tbhif any of the other trial reads are any good (haven't read them yet) you should maybe pass this one over
Plot is quite interesting. Writing was good as well as the characters backgrounds. Its a little bit different from the gaming novels. I Like it.! Keep it up author ! :D
The story is really unique and attention grabbing. It started of pretty good and from then it just spiraled down hill. The author started by switching up the MC persona to some Isekai BSed that was really throwing me off considering our MC is a harden soldier was in charge of annihilating planets πͺ and solar systems. It just didnβt fit...the image. Overkill of information that was really unnecessary to the story. EVERY female in this story is just a copy and paste like they are either meek or a loud mouth that just add on to the fillers. Story had a great potential and the author simply failed in the delivery. If you can stomach the typical tropes , isekai , female lead youβll soon forget the name of in need of saving then by all means go for it!
Hi. As for the review you asked.First, I absolutely loathe the whole βlevel up/stats' thing. When I found out your novel was following this path, it disappointed me a lot. But itβs my preference, and not a problem on how you write it. I decided not to read after reaching chapter 8.You write very well and I hope you know it. Itβs fluid and coherent, so I feel I have little to review on this part.Now, about the plot. Itβs intriguing to a certain extent, but perhaps a bit tiresome. A reader needs ups and downs to breath. But the first 8 chapters are a lot of ups. Keeping readers on their toes for a long made them mentally tired. And perhaps they donβt return to your book because it makes them holding their breath for too much time. Itβd be good to intertwine with some humor or whatever.From what I read, there are two points that bothered me a bit, but after start reading chapter 8, I think only one is really important to mention. The first chapter.Itβs not interesting nor made me thirsty for more. I found the part about the aboriginal tribe a better enticing introduction that the glimpse of future in the first chapter. I advise you to check with other readers their opinion about it as well. First chapters are crucial for getting readers.Anyway, your book is not everyoneβs cup of tea, but is fairly well written and I wish you success.
Hello there - it's me Author-kun doing the legendary shameless author review. I'm glad you found your way onto these desolate parts of WebNovel. Unfortunately if you're looking for a perfect story you've come to the wrong place.I however am a learning Author and I constantly strive to improve so that should you decide to read this not so perfect book its worth your while.Things to note about the book:*There's no x-rated content*Theres no erotica*There's no harem*There is some aspect of romance (Natural progression not rushed)*The pacing might be slow for some as the events of the story happen on a daily basisIf you made it this far and you still don't want to read it then you leave me no choice :<<<<<<Domain Expansion>>>>>>----β---- Malevolent Kitchen
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