DO YOU TRUST ME?

Please continue your novel. Your novel has potential that even in just chapter 2 im already invested in the story. Looking forward to your chapters!

This is indeed a thriller/ mystery novel. With its morse code puzzles and secret messages, it gives off a vibe of one as our mc, the female reporter, is abandoned after being framed as a murderer.

However, I have a few issues:

1. I believe I sense several plot holes that could be addressed. Now I may be wrong and not understanding something, but do keep in mind that the reader shouldn’t be mixed up either as it breaks off the immersion. First is to why did the person, who messaged our mc, give a coded message in the computer that pointed to their meeting place ? Was he trying to contact his fellow accomplices on the same computer ? ( this is not quite realistic compared to how clean the murder occurred; makes me think of a novice murderer as he could have used a burner phone in a back alley instead of potentially getting seen by people ) Why don’t both protagonists share this information to the police, or at least to her lawyer ? ( I know it may not be safe, or the criminal could escape, but she should at least be cleared of the charge ! )

2. There are some run-on sentences, and I noticed a certain section was repeated in one of the chapters. The only thing I can say is to read and sift through you chapters before and after writing as you might catch major plot holes just by rereading in a reader’s perspective.

3. Truth be told, the flow is super fast, and due to the plot holes, it feels a bit lacking. Not that I have anything against a quick plot, but I feel like it needs to be fleshed out more. This is just my personal opinion though.

All in all, the intrigue is there, so don’t give up ! You have potential just waiting to be polished. Keep up the good work, Author !

I just recently bumped and read this story and I say this is kind of underrated with bigger potential. Well written and deserve to get a full five star! If you are looking for a story with surprising vibes, don't hesitate and start reading this now.

I like this story hope that the author won't just drop it like the others. The more I read it, the more I want to finish it. Hope the author constantly update its chapter. ❤️

Okay first of all, I love how the story is going and I’m really interested in finding out How the story will be.

A little tip from me, you should elaborate more on the characters and their feelings. but that’s just a suggestion

Your story really builds the suspense pretty well and the pace is just right. It feels like a really well thought plot. I was left with so much questions and wanting to know more... so intriguing. I love mystery stories.
There are some gramatical little errors but it is a great start author. Please keep up the good work! I can't wait to know more!

You have a potentially good story. I would suggest you write a bit of world-building because I am confused about the setting of the story. is it in China or somewhere else? I would like to see descriptions of places and characters. I also would advise you to look up how to write in the active tone of voice instead of passive. this story has some grammar issues. other than that keep up the good work.