Story concepts are decent the in game world is okay
but overall the story givers the feeling of being a naïve 15 year old boy's fantasy. The mc is a bit dim and the girls are all simple, easy and gullible, supposed to be based in America but it doesn't feel like the author has even read about the country and so doesn't understand the culture, social norms, economy, politics etcetera it feels more like a weird China or Korea
I'm at chapter 144, and I want to like the story because the idea is cool, but between the inconsistencies, plot holes, shallow emotionless characters, bulky plot armor and jarring disconnect between the setting and the culture I'd rather spend my coins elsewhere...
First off I want to say it's rare I gave something a full 5 stars. But I couldn't find any flaw big enough to warrant a 4 star in any category.
Great novel so far that has lots of things that make it differ from novels of the same type.
The author seems to regularly ask for the opinions and feedback from his/her readers about what they think and what they want to see and not see in the novel.
So far the MC is pretty great, hes not super meek or arrogant so far (let's hope it stays that way)
So far he seems pretty normal and I can see myself reacting the same way as he does to a lot of the situations.
Not sure about the romance yet as it's still early but it seems to be doing well on that front and has lots of potential. It also has pretty funny humor and I find myself laughing at most of those moments.
It's managed to separate itself from all of the VR mmo novels out there and I find myself checking for a new chapter everyday.
Love the novel and recommend it even if you hate VR mmos and the like!
The author has done such a great job writing this story, he took the going back in time reincarnation thing and has done something truly different with it. The mc has so many great abilities, along with the brain to use them to their greatest potential. There is also a great use of the butterfly effect which brings unexpected events and results from the MC's actions which he never expected so it is very fresh compared to those other characters who know how everything happens and start freaking out when the timeline changes, while this MC notices that somethings have changed, but accepts it. My only regret about this story is that it is so good I read all 159 chapters (current amount released) in one day and I'm still wanting more hahaha.
this novel was one of the winners of Spirity , so it had great potentials, but alas it got a rushed ending , everything was rushed ,from relationships ,romance, powere ,etc ...
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but overall the story givers the feeling of being a naïve 15 year old boy's fantasy. The mc is a bit dim and the girls are all simple, easy and gullible, supposed to be based in America but it doesn't feel like the author has even read about the country and so doesn't understand the culture, social norms, economy, politics etcetera it feels more like a weird China or Korea
I'm at chapter 144, and I want to like the story because the idea is cool, but between the inconsistencies, plot holes, shallow emotionless characters, bulky plot armor and jarring disconnect between the setting and the culture I'd rather spend my coins elsewhere...
Great novel so far that has lots of things that make it differ from novels of the same type.
The author seems to regularly ask for the opinions and feedback from his/her readers about what they think and what they want to see and not see in the novel.
So far the MC is pretty great, hes not super meek or arrogant so far (let's hope it stays that way)
So far he seems pretty normal and I can see myself reacting the same way as he does to a lot of the situations.
Not sure about the romance yet as it's still early but it seems to be doing well on that front and has lots of potential. It also has pretty funny humor and I find myself laughing at most of those moments.
It's managed to separate itself from all of the VR mmo novels out there and I find myself checking for a new chapter everyday.
Love the novel and recommend it even if you hate VR mmos and the like!
even the writing quality was rushed at the end
Like what the mc is like
Lovers or lover/guessing its harem bc of the tag
Is it tragic/do main characters die?
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