Divine Doctor: Genius Little Doctor of Taoyuan

I've only read a few chapters so far, but from what I see this novel has a lot of potential, good writing, and sweet dialogue so far, author please keep up the good work, I really hope you can bring out the potential of this novel 💯💯💯

Wow!, this book is simply outstanding. I love it

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

But he didn't, he really didn't want to die. He knew that he had to find some way to overcome this. His eyes darted to his surrounding. The boy found himself in a small cabin, seemingly abandoned for at least a month. His eyes landed on a red box connected to the wall.

I wondered if I should send a message to the two princesses. They seemed to be very interested in making an alliance and companionship with Vuong. Perhaps it was not clear enough that he was mine, and mine alone. Still, he would be disappointed if I got reckless immediately, something about the low profile and PR. I got lost halfway during the pillow talk due to his exotic feeling that night…

This is good **** it might need a bit more edit causeGrammar is a little clungy but it really nice.Straight from my ten thousand novel Try it you will not be disappointed

As of writing this review, I’ve only read up to Chapter 16. The author’s writing style could use improvements, especially when it comes to tenses, grammar and phrasing. From the chapters I’ve read so far, I keep getting the feel that there is a lack of direction for the plot and details with respect to world/setting. Sometimes it seems to me the MC was just running around places and doing things, being silly, asking questions that aren’t getting solid answers and evaded by other characters. This all makes it hard to grasp what’s going on with the plot/character development. Mystery is good for a story but when reading this, I felt there was too much strange mystery happening and not enough answers as a reader. Or perhaps it’s the way the MC is narrating the story that doesn’t really resonate with me. In fact, I kind of find the MC annoying with his dealings. I have to admit that this isn’t really my cup of tea. However, if you are into magical realism, creatures of the night with hints of romance in the background then this story may be for you.

One of the most amazing fantasy fiction! Highly recommended! Although I have read only a few chapters of the story. It has already hooked my interest. Keep up the good work author.