DITOLAK OLEH MANTAN, DITERIMA OLEH BOSNYA

I always enjoy reading his chapters , like this one , it's always told that Ethan's a genius so rather than showing him weak in the start , the author is using him as he has show from the start , he's a genius and this victor class ship will do alot of deeds , ethan ftw .

this story has goof development and show if skills that makes me feel jealous when i look at my own work. She takes a typical plot and makes it her own. in-fact i believe that a lot more people should read this.

This is another review of mine, focusing more on criticism. this novel has 2 problem the first one is typos which is not really a problem because the author update everyday, which is tiring. the second one is the way it's written it could be better, in the first few chapters this was a problem but as story progress this become less a problem. But this is just a recommendation on how the author can improve his writing which works like this.Cao Cap: i Will destroy you liu bei for attacking my territoryLiu Bei: Haha! go on and try cao cao! this is the day you fall! try doing this-Cao cao was angry and anxious of what's happening on his territory because of the sudden attack of liu bei causing him to be angry which result in continously screaming at liu bei, while liu bei simply taunt  and with full confidence trimuphly think that this is the day his archenemy falls.As the story progress i noticed this happening which improved the story on another lvl  but it would be appreciated if this type of writing become a norm and continue progressively, while i don't see any problem with the former the new way of writing cause its quality to improved.

But the meteor men beg to differ

"Ahhh ... Nothing. I was looking at that cat."

did you give up on this novel?  please don't give it up it's an excellent novel

The mc has overly sensitive pride,too much if i may say. there is a lot of racism remarks that unnecessary or just too much.

Tactics and strategies of epic proportions. A good novel to follow for people who like kingdom building and thought-evoking philosophies.Legend says that Aero's fate lies in the hands of Keikokumars as he is more proficient at scheming and plotting... *ugh storybuilding.Please find an editor to improve the quality of the story. There are grammar mistakes and run-on sentences among others. Just find yourself a good strategist... *cough editor.