I wait for a long time to stack chapters, but it's been a year since a update, and that's fucking sad. keep up the good work. I hope you come back soon. Love this story.
Overall a pretty solid start to a novel. After reading the free chapters I can say it has set the stage excellently for a slow slice of life with a twist. The characters are realistic with quirks but not becoming stereotypes of caricatures . As for complaints its mostly minor things, there's rare but significant translation hiccups, the setting is mostly pretty uninspired, and there's only a limited number of chapters available currently. Otherwise the pacing is a little slow, and the MC does have a "system" of sorts which may be off putting to some.
In fact, for now I like the novel ... In short, it lacks a bit of grammar and has some errors (not as much as others I've seen, MY EYES ARE LOST ALMOST!) I think if you fix it and focus a little more outside the MC, also if you post more often haha all great (even if the latter is not necessary) thanks and excellent work.
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Even though his main focus was his profound energy he did not worry too much about this, because there was no hurry while he did not have the profound arts to practice with his energy which was something never before seen, the only way was to develop them by himself and to this required a surprising amount of understanding and analysis.
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