Seems like a decent story, but just not for me. It's written in a cartoonish/anime way, as though I should read it while visualising what's written like a cartoon or an anime. A lot of minor details are left out, and it feels like things happen in defiance if reality. Feels like people teleport all over the place, turn into dust clouds when they run, cough up blood from irritation, etc. On top of all this, everything feels like it's all over the place, with no solid connection between events that follow each other, or logic to the encounters and flow of the story. While the writing quality is quite good, with few errors, the story doesn't seem like it has any substance. The characters behave way too goofy for my tastes. A lot of it feels illogical in that way. I kinda like the premise, but I feel it's poorly executed. I read up to chapter 15, and I don't know if it improved later on, but that's how iIfeel about it. But good luck to the author, and I hope your novel goes well.
It's just a shameless author review to help my book reach more readers who may be interested in a fantasy-romance.My book includes tropes like adventure, friendship, dragons, and action with a hint of romance. It's the perfect book for those who prefer a slow-burn romance that continues alongside the action and emotional rollercoaster without any extreme sexual content whatsoever.I am looking forward to converting this book into a series soon enough, and I live for your support throughout 🫶🏻
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