Devil Slave (Satan system)

The story is good, but I feel like the MC is a little wishy washy when it comes to his humanity. He is written as a psychopath and this brilliant assassin, but at times he is illogically stupid. There's also the bit about him finding humanity, losing it, and finding it again at what I thought were unnecessary times. Personally, it just kind of made the MC feel artificial, not totally bad but not great either. I liked how the world building played out. I thought that it was well done with different factions and incorporating multiple facets from an apocalyptic world. I really only have two major critiques. Firstly,  there are large parts where  I feel there is a step forward in plot, five steps back with long info dumps or a random background story, and then a mad rush of 10 steps forward with plot.  I'm sure there's a grand design, but there were whole chapters at times that I just skipped. There were definitely some plot twists that I never saw coming though coupled with some pretty entertaining dialogues as well.  My second critique is mostly  grammar. By no means is it bad, but there are times when the completely wrong word is used or an occasional character name switch.  Again, not the worst, it would just sometimes break my flow. The story as a whole  is enjoyable. Thank you for your hard work.  I was honestly surprised on how fast you could push out content.

The premise is good and it does aren’t bay the author hasa good plan on how the story should go. But the writing style is so frustrating with so many errors that it is hard to keep reading

as a fan of dark stories, this is perfect

This story is great. The character is cruel and only thinks about himself, he isn’t your average MC.
I also like how it’s unpredictable, the author keep surprising me with just how many depravites could be in one story.
It isn’t for just anybody, know that before starting.
It also has a few plotholes, but nothing major. like how he didn’t get arrested early on in the story.

bro it's just phenomenal...it's just shows the world works man hatsoff to you but bro ... your discord link is not working please fix it

Awesome book! The MC is a little crazy but it's a great read✅

The MC scenes like light from that from the description of the book alone.

Are you reading reviews? Stop and READ it already. You can't find a better story than this.
As the writer said once, "The words of my pen are my art..."