Detention with a Psychopath - HORROR STORY (COMPLETED)

Seemed interesting. I thought, Hey a story about a sytem that slowly turns tbe mc into a fill blown vampire, neat right? While the idea is certainly cool, and the world backgrojnd at least plausible in the sense that its slightly different from the usual people from regular earth now have powers trope, its...dull.The characters are currently extremely shallow, there is the most strange contrivances and forced behavior.  Now trust me I want to enjoy the story but the amount of hand waving required is rather high. Im at the point where its required that I simlly forget about any semblance of logic or reasoning. Heck even just basic plot flow requires me to have immense suspension of disbelief.  Tbe idea has great merit. The method the author uses to slowly change the mc into a monsterous creature is neat. The actjal implementation within tbe story and how the mc and surrounding characters react is not neat. Its dull.Keep trying author, I am sure you will make it better and better as you go. Just dont force stuff. You want something to happen, ok, them think about the most logical and realistic way it could happen in the world setting. Dont just force things to occur a la deus ex machina, hand wave miracle juice. Good luck!

The writing ✍ quality 👌 is good 👍 👌. Story line is just great 👍 👌 😀 😄.  love ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ to read 📚 design 😀 ❤️  of character 😀 is fantastic

Dis book is wonderful pls update the suspense is killing me It's a very interesting book I wonder how the competition will be or if he gets d girl how it ends overall it's a very interesting book

Average translation, horrible editing. In specific, the capitalization, uniformity, text spacing was terrible. The stat screen and all of the ‘system’ stuff was just a mess to look at.The author can’t do simple arithmetic (what’s new), the novel is underwhelming, and for someone who knows hardly anything about DND, this novel just seemed like a bunch of gibberish.The TL says that anyone can enjoy it regulars less of whether they know DND or not, but it’s clearly not the case. Most of the text is just info drops or assumes you know DND knowledge.I don’t feel like spending my time writing a more thorough review for such an underwhelming novel.tl;dr: terrible novel for non-DND enthusiasts (probably still bad for DND enthusiasts because the author/TL got fundamental DND stuff wrong according to commenters)

This is a unique story, it is a mixture of; battle spirits, modern world, ancient world and reincarnation.Diff my cup of tea!Highly recommend it tho i have a question to the author, is it harem?😉And please speed up the updates for this story too!honestly both your books are addicting.Thank you

its goooooooooooddd Translation Quality: I can read it just fine.Updating Stability: uh um... hmmm i- 4-5 stars? I cant put 4.5 soo yeah. Its alright its not like everyday but its not that long of a wait ish...Story development: i can see good potential like the snake pits growth, the meeting with the other people who reincarnated into the new world, or just how she is a monster(snake) in a dungeon(?) i forgot some details not the brightest mind here. Also so far so good. Oh and i cant forget that wasp arc thingy... potential ml? Ehhhh?👀Character Design: uh nice its pretty cool. Its a nice twist that the kids teacher became their system. Also at the beginning, whats up with that dude who killed all the other students like that shii was crazy. It was not truck-kun, no it was a mf crazy stuckup prince syndrome guy who killed bc huh? I dont rmb the details no more but gosh darn does that still ring a bellWorld background: umm its a world.. a fantasy world mind you soo uh details? Dont rmb them.. i think its pretty structured i think... yeahAnywho overall rate it’ll say 4.4 BUT i personally think its either a 4.4-4.5 ... sooo yup so its a recommended  from me eee

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Honestly. I enjoyed the beginning but then there are some critical things that don't make sense at all. His power level is inconsistent and literally don't know anything about how strong he is compared to others. World building also doesn't make sense as well. Ascension isn't described properly so clueless regarding that. Basically Mc is as strong as the author wants him to be at any given point so you always have no clue how strong he is.