The writing quality is okay but I’m dropping it. I got to around chapter 30 and the every freaking character s-s-stutters and it’s freaking annoying me. People can be surprised or scared or have pretty much any negative emotion without stuttering. It’s okay if one of the characters has a habit of stuttering, it can even be an obvious sign of character development when he develops more confidence but the excessive amount of stuttering by multiple characters, both the typically confident and unconfident, up to this point is a huge turn off.
Mixing of the game world with the sandbox will ultimately kill this novel. It will give birth to the 'shameless' protagonists that we all know and love. This will eventually destroy any consequences the actions had.The story will ultimately boil down to a xianxia. if only he just watched the world develop without adding protagonists into the story.oh such a lovely story destroyed by having to add an unlimited number of players.
i like this story.one of the most populer webnovel on qidian chinawith over 3800++ chapterand now come to qidian international.i hope the translator to improve their translation ability and start avoiding use of pinyin for easy term
Super fun plot so far, and I’m only on 30. I excited for the rest of trial read. I love the intrigue and different magic systems. This has a ton of potential and will probably quite a fun adventure!
Your story is like a magnet. Each chapter makes the readers want for more. I don't want to spoil the fun of others but you're seriously missing out if you're not reading this excellent masterpiece.
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