
DESTINY GAMES
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Author:
DMadLord
- Status: Ongoing
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this one is similar to legion, so hes peak!
One thing that I hope you do better than in GREED is the placement of the pay wall. I think that it was just too early in GREED. Or well at least considering how you wrote the beginning it was too early. I think more people would have been interested if the free chapters started later. I don't know how much control an author has over that or if its webnovel that has a say in it. However I think that you should carefully consider where to put it here.
I have seen many authors, the quality of their novels has decreased like this.
90% confirmed that the second novel has more filler content than other novels. such as conversations or thoughts between fights - women or insignificant characters' thoughts about the mc - forced situations where random characters try to engage with the mc. And everything that is not related to the story and is repeated in all novels.
In short, just pay attention to that part of talking or additional explanations and people's thoughts exactly in the middle of the fight (I'm begging you), you want to give only a pure fight with notes about the movements after the fight.
I know you have your own thoughts. Good job. Good luck.
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