This is the second time review the novel .Guys , you don't know what you lose by no reading this novel .It is a dramatic masterpiece ! Please support the author that for real is doing a great job !
An easy to read novel with very good narration the writing quality is good too and the world-building and plot are excellent I am looking forward to being part of that mysterious girl's journey Keep up the good work Author
The story is seemingly well thought out, the world building is decent, it has an easy flow when it comes to reading it. The characters could be fleshed out more but the main character is basically a blank slate so I can't really complain... There's minor errors in every chapter regarding the writing quality but it's pretty readable for the most part.
This novel is easy to read, chapters aren't so long and the narration are on point and descriptive. easy language is there and proper diaogues making me to connect. good work author keep it up
This story is so catching and touching. The first chapters got me in my feelings already. It is amazing how good you describe the incidents happening, makes me feel like I am in the story myself. Well done!!!
Interesting start. I am curious about the mysterious girl's identity.
A lot of worldbuilding can be seen, the author also did a good job in depicting the cruelty of war.
The only thing I would like to point out is that dialogue tags are overused at times, but it improves in the later chapters.
Overall, great job!
Awesome storyline, I feel so sad about the kids, but I'm sure this story is bound to have a happy ending. It's a journey I'll have to embark on and I'm fully ready for it. Kudos to the author....your novel is captivating
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A lot of worldbuilding can be seen, the author also did a good job in depicting the cruelty of war.
The only thing I would like to point out is that dialogue tags are overused at times, but it improves in the later chapters.
Overall, great job!