First of, great work author, interesting storyline, and well-written chapters( spotted no grammar error) even though I just started reading, I'm already hooked, I really like how the first chapter was written, the author has done such a great job at designing the characters too. So keep up the good work author. I'm sending you my best wishes.🤗🤗
Really enjoying this story. the grammar has some problems but still easy to read. i also enjoy how the character and world are. The pace of the story is also good.
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Me gusta pero estas mucho tiempo en la realidad en ves de en el juego llevas muchos capítulos y aún no se casi nada del juego ni lo he ara el personaje en el.
It starts a bit slow but once you are inmersed in the plot, the intrigue doesnt let go. I would recommend it to young readers who are looking for adventure and mystery involving a bit of history.
Great story overall, characters design are great tho teh Mc act a bit weird at times. The story development is amazing as that’s a lot of twist and turn taht I didn’t expect. The only issue I have honestly is just the translation quality, some stuff is inconsistent here n thereAll in all, I love the story
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