Despair of Darkness

My father looked at me with a slanted smile and mumbled. "Hah, sucker child."

Well written 👏 👌. . keep it up 💯. Anticipating the next

the idea isn't bad it's just lacks proper execution , the first mistake u made is not giving the main character a proper backstory at the beginning of the story , a backstory allows us to know why the mc is so resourceful in the wild ,how was he able to sneak up on the boar without being noticed , it lets us know what kind of character the mc has and it lets us know why the mc has good looking physique  without a proper backstory it makes everything the mc does feel like it's coming out of know where , also your main character is coming to conclusions to fast without proper explanation or thinking  , I Can except if he guessed he was transmigrated , but the mc shouldn't have figured out he has soul magic by just using it once and progression with the power is a litt little bit to fast  , also the mc is in wilderness , creating a harem of beast girls should be the last thing on his mind , it makes him look like somebody who doesn't have common sense and him thinking of turning an animal into  beast girl is weird and out pocket, if u wanted to add that sheep girl , u could have just had the MC turn the sheep into waifu by mistake or accident   , that way u could have added the sheep girl and it wouldnt make the main character come across as an idiot and its less weird as for the rest , there are too many chapters for how little the story progressed , these 10 chapters can easily be compressed to 4 chapters . That's all i have too say , u have potential u are just not using it properly  let me give u advice , anytime u write a chapter , read it before hand and ask yourself is there anywhere i can improve and making it better or more exciting

It a good story. I'm simply waiting for the updates. So far, I had a good time reading this. Btw, good book cover. I don't really know what else to say.

I am giving everything, but updates and its not because the whole thing about writing being bad. Writing and reading is subjective these days which is okay for me. This author is known for not completely always updating which is fine, but still when you have an itch and wanna scratch it and you can't that it can be annoying at times. I can always wait, but holy falcon. I would love to see what the author cooks up with more frequency. I am an oldbie who is excited to see the repost and hoping that more than anything this a good sign for the future of this book!

It's pathetic to rate myself. Please give it a chance and read it.

Thanks for reading the hero's son is monster, i hope you will enjoy this work and support me until the end. I will do my best to maintain a consistent release schedule; as for the quality of the story, Idk, i still lack talent and experience.