I had only read up to pair games (almost 20 chapters). The reason is simple.
1. Grammar sucks. Author either is at A2 level of english or just uses GTranslate. Possibly both. No, it's more like he is B1 for a paragraph and then, the next paragraph is straight out of MTL.
2. Trans. This is just my personal preference, but I am not really into *Spoiler*
40-old man leaning on our young mc, falling in love with him, turning girl outside games, falling in love even more, and turning into 40-year old man in-game. Those conversations of:" Would you marry me if I turned back to man?" Made me sick. Again, this is not sickening to anyone (obv, since author seems to have such fetish), but to me, it is. Whoever reads this, be careful, cuz they may even kiss in the near future in their male forms. *Spoiler*
Outside of that, the idea was good. Actually good. No wonder it won the prize. Author, if you wish to actually make it big, please just don't do sick things and find a proper editor or use a software, I recommend grammarly.
So far is did enjoy the survival games plot of the novel.
i found it refresh that the gamers in to novel skills are unique for their own personalities.
it main me wonder what skill i can get if i going the desire games.
but no plan to die thought.
more chapters
So far i found the plot interesting.
its a bit to early to say about the what is going on.
the games in novel are simple but with a twist interesting.
I hope that more the games related chapters.
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1. Grammar sucks. Author either is at A2 level of english or just uses GTranslate. Possibly both. No, it's more like he is B1 for a paragraph and then, the next paragraph is straight out of MTL.
2. Trans. This is just my personal preference, but I am not really into *Spoiler*
40-old man leaning on our young mc, falling in love with him, turning girl outside games, falling in love even more, and turning into 40-year old man in-game. Those conversations of:" Would you marry me if I turned back to man?" Made me sick. Again, this is not sickening to anyone (obv, since author seems to have such fetish), but to me, it is. Whoever reads this, be careful, cuz they may even kiss in the near future in their male forms. *Spoiler*
Outside of that, the idea was good. Actually good. No wonder it won the prize. Author, if you wish to actually make it big, please just don't do sick things and find a proper editor or use a software, I recommend grammarly.
i found it refresh that the gamers in to novel skills are unique for their own personalities.
it main me wonder what skill i can get if i going the desire games.
but no plan to die thought.
more chapters
its a bit to early to say about the what is going on.
the games in novel are simple but with a twist interesting.
I hope that more the games related chapters.
There is already an error before you hit the second "Pg Dn" button on the keyboard