So glad I found ur book here love the story and how well described every scene is it creates a great effect of imagery . Extremely excited to read more chapters
Is this a harem author?....................................................................................................................................
Amazing writing style. This right here is pro level writing, I’m speachless. There are little to no mistakes, it’s smooth and addictive, there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment
Too much dry information about various tower facilities being what level, and as usual mc is a dickless virgin who runs away from sex..... Whats the point of having a obedient female harem when u keep writing about a dickless vegetarian mc ??? However this are only minor issues so i minus only half a point... The story itself is mostly base development and hero development.... It is interesting with good pacing and i am looking forward to read more.
Everything is good. Characters, system, background and even the system. Overall, amazing!👏👏👏First seven chapters are about how Yuan dies and then the real story begins.Slow pace story!
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