Story overall is super basic with constant writing deveatioms leading to meaningless prose and incessant repeating of lines. Overall the author wants to try to fill up the word count with detail but fails most of the time. Martial Arts theme is cool and all but just not executed that well. Typos almost every paragraph. They range from improper grammar to entirely missing words. If the author were just to read over what he wrote it would easily be an entertaining read. The fact of the matter is the authors lack of editing just leads to the readers becoming unwilling editors themselves. I can confidently predict that if the Author focused any amount on cleaning up simple mistakes the novel could easily become more popular. Unfortunately as it stands the Novel is very close to MACHINE TRANSLATION quality and thus at most will be considered a filler book between people waiting for what they actually enjoy reading.
First of all, thank you author for not dropping this fantastic novel, and now that u have started to edit and rewrite some parts of the story, btw which does feel quite an improvement. Just hope that it will now have chapter stability, also Take your time but please not much that people forget about the novel. Good work author and will try to support you in any way I can. Thanks!
I tried to read but I dropped it in chapter 42, the author says that the protagonist is smart and always thinks about everything before acting, but in 42 chapters he has already made many stupid mistakes...
Hi MadReader, is it okay if I plug my novel in the comment's section of some of your chapters? There's no direct message option yet but I want to share my story to some of your readers, hoping you'll not find it offending. In exchange, I won't mind if you plug your novel in my comment's section too.
I'm loving what I am reading so far. The story is intriguing and I was captivated by it. This is the second book about a system that I have read, and it's really good. I can't wait to keep on reading to see how the character progresses. Keep up the good work.
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