I am hooked. The main character is interesting. I like how the author explores what the MC is about. The world building is cool, I want to know more about the world and explore it through the MC's eyes. Was impressed with the progression, the pacing is done well. Fun characters. I like it :) Looking forward to more. Note to any new readers: the grammar is a little shaky at times , but you can still easily comprehend what is being said.
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A well written story, but it does seem to be missing a hook of some kind. There not much that differentiates it from all the other born in a fantasy world with a system. It looks like there is hints that the romance will be non-traditional which might add something as the story develops.
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