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This is pretty well made xD I didn't know what to expect with the title... but so far, the story is quite pulling! A transmigration story that has a protagonist who doesn't like being human become a demon. I wonder what we can expect in the future chapters, but I'm positive that it'll be good :)

Woah. That's a surprisingly good plot and story start.
Looking forward to the rest.
I would advise that you focus a bit in sentence construction, that will increase the whole story by a level because that is the only con I saw.

This is a great story, it starts in a way that I've never seen before. I'm a fantasy nut and I've never seen someone be rencarnated from a space mafia to a demon. Top notch creativity, and very interesting plot. Can't wait to see where it goes.

That's a really interesting story setting, especially those dark elements in the prologue, I found it's really interesting.

Your ideas for the story is really special and different from any other works I have read, I don't know how should I put it, but it's a good different. I'm impressed at your courage and creativity in writing this unique idea of story background.

Well wasn't that an interesting start.
There were only two chapters out when this review was written, but it is fully deserving a full five stars!
At the beginning I kinda wanted to dislike the MC. The whole of first chapter was very weird for me. I was full of complex emotions, but then I read the final sentence and a shiver ran down my spine.
Then I came to the second chapter, not sure what to expect. But upon reading it I found that I really liked it! I really am looking forward to where this author will take the story, it is quite intriguing and exciting.

writing is good, don't know about stability of updates yet, but story development s good, character design is good, world background hasn't been seen much yet.

A good start, with minimal grammar errors and good prose. This'll go far given enough time. Dialogue flows organically, but you might want to flesh it out a bit more. Describe the character's cadence or subtle mannerisms during dialogue to give it more impact and individuality.

Other than that? I'll see what becomes of this after a few more chapters. Keep on writing

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