Awesome, the novel was worth my time, l enjoyed every chapter. Keep up the good work author, looking forward to your future novels. Waiting for chap update [img=update]
This is a good story with a good plot mc level progress is a little bit fast but that's understandable since he is op in this world so far everything is good I enjoy reading this story.
To be honest, I'm disappointed, why? Because I really enjoy this yet it only consist of 7 chapters!? I keep scrolling and now it's the end? Author I need more of this. I really like your system and despite the fact that your first language isn't english, I can say that your description is easy to understand and very vivid. I hope you continue writing this masterpiece.
Good read, the first chapter was good and the author did a good job with the introduction, I love a story when it is about war, it kinda gives you many ideas about an epic scene. Overall, not a bad novel. Great job!
Very good and descriptive! I love the way you started the novel with “A meaningless war” or smth like that. Also, your word-building is nice, I like it a lot! The plot already is intriguing and the book itself from the first phrase. Keep up the good work!
I am really impressed! I enjoyed the first chapter down to the last drop. I also see that the author updates frequently. That's great dedication! I admire you, author HeavenlySleeper. Thank you and keep up the good job!
This is actually a very interesting novel so far and got me hooked . Grammar is a little bad but still understandable so it's alright for now. Seems good until now and I hope it grows into another big thing because this seriously have a lot of potential. And I am not very good with English either so... yeah it's all good in my eyes . Keep it up author.
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Yep, I will rate my story 5 stars cuz- why not? it's not really that bad... it's actually good in my eyes but dunno about you-
Well anyways if you either liked it or disliked it just say it in comments or reviews.