I must say, best story I've ever read so far, kudos to the Writers [img=recommend][img=exp]....
and about the Antihero Antagonist you should make him venomous rather than being somehow good.....
I'm really glad I came across this book the cover is top and the title is ALSO jjang so these two are enough to catch my attention. TBH even though I knew that MC is a guy when I read him talking about his rebirth, I can't help but subconsciously think of him as a girl
Yes, I'm giving it a five star.
why?
It's awesome.
secondly, I won't say much about the novel. I'd rather let it speak for itself.
It starts off different to other system novels in my opinion. But the fun begins straight from the start.
A villain mc is something I didn't know I had in me. But look what we got here.
The writing quality is good. But since you're writing from a past perspective, don't mix it up with present tense. something like end should be written as ended when something that you're trying to say. 'has' is a present tense and 'had' is past. Don't confuse it
I find the pace slow other then that evil neutral mc a very nice background and the mc is sometimes dumb but other times smart but its still 30 chps so i cant say much.
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and about the Antihero Antagonist you should make him venomous rather than being somehow good.....
I though he will quite scheming person and cunning but it doesn't feel to me.
There's also mistakes in typos and some grammar
why?
It's awesome.
secondly, I won't say much about the novel. I'd rather let it speak for itself.
It starts off different to other system novels in my opinion. But the fun begins straight from the start.
A villain mc is something I didn't know I had in me. But look what we got here.