Just so you know, I still hate you for deleting your previous work "The Seventh Crown" but this one seems promising so I'll forgive you a little.
That was unique and I liked how the story progressed with 5 different POVs. Given the number of collections on the first week, I suppose I am not the only one who thought it was good. But after only 13 chapters, you deleted it while leaving us the most crucial and nerve breaking plot twist! I won't forgive you for it.
I wish you'll publish "The Seventh Crown" once again.
PS: Though this current story is good, it's not good enough compared to your previous work.
P.S. You asked for a review in author's note so I will.
I've been reading this web novel for a while now, and while I genuinely enjoy the story, there are definitely some areas that could use improvement. The plot is engaging, and the characters are well-developed, which keeps me invested. I can see the author’s passion for storytelling, and it’s evident that their writing is getting better with each chapter.
However, the upload schedule can be quite frustrating. I often find myself eagerly checking for updates, only to be met with long gaps between chapters. It disrupts the flow of the story, and I really wish it was more consistent.
I’ve also noticed that some of the combat scenes feel a bit childish. While I love the action, it would be great to see more variety and creativity in how these battles play out.
Overall, I really hope the author continues to work on this story. There’s so much potential here, and I’m rooting for you to see it through to the end (or at least let us know if they decide to drop it).
I'm rating this 5/5 since the idea of Dinosaurs is quit unique, but please! Please! Bring back the "The Seventh Crown" because I was so addicted to Czael Elizabeth and his POV! Why did you delete it?!
SINCE YOU ASKED TO RATE THE FIRST 10 CHAPTER, HERE IT IS:
The ONE has a cool idea, but the way it’s written is sometimes NOT VERY smooth. Even though there are some parts that are really good, there are also parts that are hard to understand. I’m still enjoying it and want to know what happens next.
BE CONSISTENT, ALSO AT UPDATING. You're doing a good job already.
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That was unique and I liked how the story progressed with 5 different POVs. Given the number of collections on the first week, I suppose I am not the only one who thought it was good. But after only 13 chapters, you deleted it while leaving us the most crucial and nerve breaking plot twist! I won't forgive you for it.
I wish you'll publish "The Seventh Crown" once again.
PS: Though this current story is good, it's not good enough compared to your previous work.
Stay safe, Author!
P.S. You asked for a review in author's note so I will.
I've been reading this web novel for a while now, and while I genuinely enjoy the story, there are definitely some areas that could use improvement. The plot is engaging, and the characters are well-developed, which keeps me invested. I can see the author’s passion for storytelling, and it’s evident that their writing is getting better with each chapter.
However, the upload schedule can be quite frustrating. I often find myself eagerly checking for updates, only to be met with long gaps between chapters. It disrupts the flow of the story, and I really wish it was more consistent.
I’ve also noticed that some of the combat scenes feel a bit childish. While I love the action, it would be great to see more variety and creativity in how these battles play out.
Overall, I really hope the author continues to work on this story. There’s so much potential here, and I’m rooting for you to see it through to the end (or at least let us know if they decide to drop it).
The ONE has a cool idea, but the way it’s written is sometimes NOT VERY smooth. Even though there are some parts that are really good, there are also parts that are hard to understand. I’m still enjoying it and want to know what happens next.
BE CONSISTENT, ALSO AT UPDATING. You're doing a good job already.