Dawn- An age of Darkness

Pretty nice. I would like to your works more.The story changes quite much as it advances, thats the fact I liked the most about it. I seriously liked the details about the world and stuff.

I m giving 5/5 star for this novel.. .it's really well return while the character development is superb... The way it shows his emotions, fear while he still want to survive in a unknown place is making it more thrilling..... It easy to understandable which make it intresting

Just into chapter 1 your already sent on a heart pounding journey of fighting. Perfect for dark fantasy lovers looking for action right at the start. I will definitely add this to my library for updates. I really am liking it so far, so keep it up! (as u can see, I like using gifs).

My kind of story, fantasy with a dark twist, where the MC is always fighting to survive, the world grows with each chapter and the author knows how to describe it well, besides all the fights of course.

ok, i like this kind style who use many narration from first pov(protag). For some reason, this is will be my inspiration about  narration for my novel which is had deficiency for each chapter.

It's pretty well written. But there are some things im not comfortable with. The inner monologue, for example, is written in pretense tense and can sometimes be distracting since there are no italics. Other than that it's pretty well written.

I personally know the author so I'm trying to be as unbiased as possible.
This is a good story. The narration is well enough and there aren't any glaring problems with the writing. Some awkward sentences are here and there but I mostly enjoyed this. Hopefully, everyone else will too.