Author Mary! it's me, from Wattpad. I'm one of your first readers. I want you to know that while it hurts that you deleted your book on Wattpad, I will always be supportive of your works. thank you for letting me know that you renamed the book and placed it here, and thank you for writing a Book 2!
This novel, not biased, have the potential to be one of the best novels on this app. I'm not even kidding, it has the potential to be at least in top 10, if not top 5. Okay, let start with what makes this good. First, the writing quality is peak. You will see little to none grammatical errors, or spelling errors, for that matter. So you don't have to bang your head in order for you to understand what the hell the writing means. The description is very good; it allows your brain to vividly imagine what's going on without you putting much effort to it.Story development? Honestly, I would argue it is one of the best aspects of this book. I won't spoil it for you but the foreshadowing is absolutely fire 🔥. There won't be a lot of info dumps at early chapters and the development is not fast nor slow, just perfect. There is also comedy and humour to lighten the tone so you won't get bored. Character design. The characters are almost life like and you won't see any characters acting bizarre like in your usual cultivation novel. There maybe some cringe stuff to them, but you will definitely relate to most of the characters and intimately understand them, specially the MC.The world background. To be frank, the novel is in its early stages, and if you are familiar with the author other works, then you can at least depend on him that much 😉. So my advice is to read it and see for yourself.Now there are some minor issues as well. But they are nothing problematic. However, one issue I'd like to push to the author is that, will this be a harem novel or not? for me personally, I'd like to be single FMC and most of the readers, from my experience, will also like to agree as well. The reason behind it is that, it is not a smut novel is shgs, this novel is fantasy/action/romance book. But it ultimately is about beast, and I think making it a harem will beat that purpose. On the other hand though, please do continue to write some lemon scenes. I think this much will appease the harem route readers. But yeah, this is it. P.S. if you like novels about dragons, you're in for a ride (u2060◠u2060‿u2060◕u2060).P.S.(2) Author, this might be selfish of me but please increase the chapter release rate 🙏🏿
I always read all your work especially Vimpire caregiver and a fame chess which ends in tragedy but please what is the problem with sold to the beastly alpha ? But honestly , your work is very good . I'm your fun. Keep it up.
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