Dangerous: Don't cross the line!

just so in love wow would recommend this book to anyone looking for love and drama 😍 💕 ❤️

Okay first of all, A good good world building novel.Good concept regarding the MC and his idea to be planted in the new world. I'm interested to see how it develops.there are a few things which could have been in depth and explained to keep readers more hooked but not complaining much.The pace is sometimes slow and fast to understand the book so maybe the author can work on that.And please, please, proofread the MC name, it's being updated as Atlan sometimes from your other novel to this.I hope this novel is not a short one but a good base and more world exploring.Overall a good read. Thank you.

Your characters' dialogue feels so natural and authentici need review also