Dancing Between The Hearts- Tylia and Theo

its pretty poor writing and nothing new. wouldnt recommend it. i dont understand why reviews has to be long but well. if you are bored give it a try but its really just plain

So far the author has done a good job with the book. The writing style and flow have no errors within them. While the book may be about cultivation which has become a somewhat bland category, the author offers a unique concept to this genre with this book. If done right it could end up as a great novel, and so far it has been good.

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Now the battle has ended. Huna army has won over the armies who came to protect Buddhist monastery and monastery is destroyed and many monks got killed. few monks are able to run away with whatever they could save, some scriptures, records, relics or only their lives. The apathetic gaze of Arya looked at the scene at the front and she said "Virtues always prevail over sins. When will it happen in the mortal world? As of now, it seems, sins are prevailing. If sinners increased, it might also create obstructions for the spiritual journey of yogis due to the reduction of the spiritual energy of virtues."

"Can we disarm the traps?"

<p>It was locked, but Xu Xiyan had always kept its key. She looked inside her bag and rummaged around for the key. What she did not know was that someone was closing in behind her.</p>

"What the-?" Nathan asked, "You killed an old woman?"

'It is still intact! It is still intact' I shouted it loudly and then laugh whoheartedly.