well a good novel with an intersting approach of fantasy powers the background of the mc is mind blowing i already read story with a similar problem for the mc but this one is introduced in a way that make the readers think that the mc might not survive for long overall a good story
Overall, this was a great read. The personalities of the characters have been perfectly meshed out in my opinion and the main cast are repeatedly shown, unlike some other novels where they just get forgotten or vanish for some time. The main character surprisingly has a brain which was a sharp contrast to the novels i have read till now. He doesn't hesitate to use his money, kill people, use his influence and relationships to his own benefit. I feel like the buildup of the first meeting of the mc and the fml is getting a bit dragged out but it's going to be resolved soon anyways. The world background is actually pretty good. I especially liked the unique magic system used in this novel which was pretty innovative as compared to the novels where the people simply have to imagine doing the magic or make some circles. The only problem I've had with the novel so far is the updating stability. The chapters are released at an extremely slow pace and there isn't even a fixed schedule for it. Only 2 chapters are released in a month which makes it look like it'll take years to even finally let Eva and Rayne meet. If the chapter release was even like 2 per week, I'd rate this a 10/5.
Would normally give the story 4.5/5 but there's a lot of stories there are written 10x times worse and gets better scores than this one. I don't rly understand webnovel score system, but this story defnly deserves the 5 stars a lot more than a lot of other stories, so ig ill give it 5 stars.
Very good story with good writing quality though there's some places with wrong grammar (it doesn't rly happen that often, so it doesn't rly matter in the end. sometimes things can be a lil vague, like with amy trying to seduce MC (know that I wasn't the only one who didn't get that) but overall its a solid story that ill keep reading.
it is a great story with an unresponsive community ,it might be some people's might not be for others i got hooked on the second chapter read the first 10 chapters than decide whether it is worth continuing or not (p.s there might be grammatical mistakes which will break the immersion so if you find any mistake than post a para comment on it ,this author sees them and corrects them accordingly , if you hit the mark. so, don't worry about being ignored)
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Very good story with good writing quality though there's some places with wrong grammar (it doesn't rly happen that often, so it doesn't rly matter in the end. sometimes things can be a lil vague, like with amy trying to seduce MC (know that I wasn't the only one who didn't get that) but overall its a solid story that ill keep reading.
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